Branch – First Draft Reviews

The first reviews for the first draft are in.

The common consensus seems to be that the concept is good, but it has some initial pacing issues and some character issues that need to be resolved. Since it’s just the first draft, however – I’m pretty happy with that, all things considered.

I’m going to make a detailed plan of the changes that I need to make and then spend some time crafting v1.1 – I may well go quiet for another month or two.

See you all in December, if not before.